tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-816513164777678855.post7261456483252254844..comments2012-10-23T09:54:19.890-07:00Comments on In The Slammer With Grammar: The ScabsKellen Middletonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08392215755687031673noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-816513164777678855.post-87734436826374554982012-10-01T15:24:03.620-07:002012-10-01T15:24:03.620-07:00especially love that last line, Kellen. lol.especially love that last line, Kellen. lol.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00257940218680612340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-816513164777678855.post-56661536960797088592012-10-01T11:39:02.815-07:002012-10-01T11:39:02.815-07:00Haha oh football. I have to agree with G. I'm ...Haha oh football. I have to agree with G. I'm a 49ers fan and dislike the Seahawks, but we all have our differences.<br /><br />You have loads of appositives in your blog, some you didn't even mark, along with aaawwubbis clauses.<br /><br />I am a bit unsure about your parallelism though. ( I would have copy and pasted it in here, but my kindle is being dumb) It sounds more like an aaawwubbis clause rather than parallelism. The parallelism as we have mentioned before with the Obama sentence has it listing several things. "With a Kenyan father, Hawaiian mother, etc. . . " which has all the listing components equal each other to create parallelism.<br /><br />I liked your color coding technique. I'll have to dothatnext time. But besides the parallelism issue, maybe take another look at your blot and find theother aaawwu bis clauses and apositives that you didn't mark. You're using them and you didn't even know it! Haha wellthat is our goal for this class! :)Rebecca Schmiemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03357370279996902192noreply@blogger.com